Talk:Storyline/@comment-26924283-20150824211414

I've tried spending some time looking over the storyline and have to congratulate you on what you've come up with so far. There's not much I can add but, I think your idea of Horn using the pizzas to fund his hidden project makes sense. Research showed me that Niobium is actually a fairly inexpensive material. Today, it sells for somewhere around $20 a pound. If Niobuim was being smuggled in by Dr Horn then it wouldn't have been part of the ingredients but rather the circular tray that the pizza was sitting on inside the box.

Why Nobium? Well, it's been confirmed that it's used in superconductivity and I also read that it's an important component for quantum computers!

The other thing I discovered was that in the year 2000, Niobium had a price spike where it started selling for five times its normal price. Perhaps Dr Horn was playing the market to reap the benefits and fund his 'secret' project.

Another thing to aks yourself is "is HALOS itself an AI  Quantum Computer?" Was this yet another thing that BM stole from Aperture?

GLADos was Caroline, is HALOS now Bottomley?

''"I'm Paul Bottomley (for my sins in a past life, no doubt), a friend of Chris's, and was once shot in the head for science. I was planning to create some kind of short story about how 'I' survived the BM incident through the clever use of cloning." ''

Was the message to "DR. M. FOREMAN    PERSONAL",  that appeared on the message boards, telling him to " Please report to administrator first thing today" because he's Horn's and Bottomley's Boss and he's having to answer for the excessive expenses?